This is my first
Haiku in samskRtam. I have a few insignificant ones in English.
pUrNachandrikaswapna manDalamchittaja rAgamAlika The fullmoon light
In the fantasy world
A heart-born ode
I like this one very much for its inherent musical touch. purNachandrika is a karNAtik rAga. The famous tyAgaraja kIrtana "telisi rAma chintana" is in this rAga. rAgamAlika is usually a composition with each stanza in a different rAga.
SiSira RtuchAtakAyAh nirIkshaNakArtIka dIpamCold dark season
The bird's longing
For winter lampsThe next one is just a fluke. I was trying to maintain the 5-7-5 syllable rule. Dont think too hard about it. I failed to include a good hidden meaning into it. Very seasonal in nature. Please ask if you cannot decipher the language.
Hope to post more haikus in samskRtam soon.
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